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Sat, January 23, 2010 6:14am
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Buddy4344
Best of Category 2010
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Registered: July 2005
Location: Allentown, PA
Posts: 973
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This works. the fog, muted color and strong tree to the left side all bring this together. May would like a bit more room at top and right as the barn really fills the frame.
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Buddy
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Sat, January 23, 2010 9:18am
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klb2sweet
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Registered: August 2006
Location: Columbia, South Carolina
Posts: 204
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I like this one a lot. I do agree about the spacing on the top and right. Nice job!
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Kelly
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Sat, January 23, 2010 12:41pm
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Bozzzzz
BOC 2nd 2010
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Registered: August 2005
Location: Long Island, NY
Posts: 943
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Well if its a barn and its in color, its got to be red. The misty scene and the red barn work nicely. A different crop might be in order, as stated. Nice image!!
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Sun, January 24, 2010 3:40am
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ISpy
Photo of the Year 2010
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Registered: December 2007
Location: Calgary, Alberta
Posts: 334
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Love everything about this one. That tree is amazing!
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Kevin
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Sun, January 24, 2010 4:16am
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Sambo
BOC 2nd 2011
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Registered: January 2006
Location: North Carolina, USA
Posts: 376
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Darren, I'm going to have to go against everyone on this one. I love the mood that you captured with the fog. I think that the composition is right on. The tree anchors the left side of the frame very nicely. If there was more room on the right of the frame, the composition would be very unbalanced with empty space. I really like this!
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It is never too late to be what you might have been. -George Eliot
"Shoot till you puke." -Me
Tallman Photography
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Wed, January 27, 2010 1:51pm
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ChronosIII
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Registered: November 2003
Location: Simi Valley, CA USA
Posts: 185
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I like the comp overall, the verticals on the Barn are all leaning to the left. try rotating 2.5 or 2.6 degrees CW and tell me what you think.
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Bracket, Bracket, Bracket!
Dave
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Wed, January 27, 2010 3:38pm
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KHedquist
POTQ 2010 /Bytephoto Supporter
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Registered: November 2005
Location: Salt Lake City, Utah
Posts: 1,839
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I like the muted colors. the fog is a bonus. i also like the yellow in the grass poking up through the snow. they add a nice color contrast. I think this barn would make a great seasonal subject. So we can see it change throughout the year. Nice job.
Kevin
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Kevin
"You don't take a photograph, you make it." - Ansel Adams
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Wed, January 27, 2010 4:26pm
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Redhead
POTQ 1st 2012
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Registered: December 2006
Location: Kearney, Missouri USA
Posts: 1,726
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very nice...love the foggy color
nice BG of trees in the fog
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PhotoGraphic Creations
http://marciehixson.com/
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Thu, January 28, 2010 12:01pm
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Punwit
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Registered: January 2007
Location: Ottawa, Kansas.
Posts: 500
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Buddy, thanks for the input. I do have more room up top and some slight wiggle room to the right. I have more room to the left side but felt the tree looked good close to that side. I waffled some on the crop but eventually settled on positioning the point of the barn at roughly a thirds intersection. I could provide some breathing room though as you suggest.
Kelly, thanks for the kind words and the thoughts on the position in frame. I've addressed that in my reply to Buddy above.
Mike, thanks for your interest and your kind remarks.
Kevin, glad you enjoyed the image and I thank you for your enthusiastic response.
Sam, thanks so much and I'm thrilled that the image works as is for you. Glad that we're all "working" together again. Please give your sweetheart a hug and a hello for me.
David, thanks much for taking the time to view and comment. You've got a good eye. A slight correction was indeed in need (say that five times quickly). I so appreciate forthright and informative input. I do hope you'll continue to find time to frequent the site.
Hey Kevin, thanks for viewing and commenting. I've had my eye on this barn for about 8 months and I have several other shots but I've been waiting for fog. I'll see if any of the previous shots are worthy of the contest. As always I appreciate your input.
Hi Marcie, Glad you like the shot and it's nice that we are all back and helping each other again isn't it?
Thanks again to those that took the time to help me grow as an artist.
Darren
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Thu, January 28, 2010 12:01pm
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parklawn
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Registered: March 2009
Location: Sudbury Ontario
Posts: 86
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Its a great shot....everything about is great, wouldn't change a thing....excellent image!!!!!!
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